
Oh boy, here we are at Wednesday and I'm still writing about the recordings I did from Saturday! Well, sometimes I can be rather verbose. Let's get to it...
Broke – Todd Snider
I have to be honest here, I didn't even look at this song. I've listened to this song so many times over the years, I started to just hear the progression in my head. It then became a challenge for me, could I play this song without looking it up? As I recorded the other songs, this song kept creeping back in my brain, so without looking up the chords I just started playing it. After two or three passes, I felt I had the main progressions. Feel free to listen to the original one to compare, I'd love to hear your feedback.
Lyrical Breakdown:
Credit complications in the check out line
It's an awkward situation almost every time
They keep your card behind and they keep your groceries too, yeah they do.
You try telling everybody it's a terrible mistake
But you can tell they don't believe that's true
It's written all over you when you're broke.
I hung my head down as I walked out the door
I'm never ever going back to that store
They treated me like a bum in front of everyone behind me in line.
It was all my friends and neighbors lookin' at me
Like I'd committed some kind of crime
I guess you ain't worth a dime when you're broke.
Why if I had money like I did in my day?
Just out of spite I think I'd give it away
I thought it didn't even matter anyway
And the more I thought the madder I got.
By the time I got home I was seeing red
I pulled the gun up out from under my bed
I put a sock on my head and into the night I flew, away I flew.
The next thing I know I've got blood on my hands
But I've got money in my pockets too
You never know what you'll do until you do what you do when you're broke.
Now if I had money like I did in my day
I'd buy a car and drive us far away
Of course you know I've got a debt to pay to society
Honey, wait for me.
With good behavior I'll be out in seven years
Don't worry over me or shed any tears
I've learned a lot in here and I know what a chance I blew.
The next time I won't make the same mistake
I'll shoot the camera out too
I'm learning all kinds of things you can do when you're broke, I'm broke.
The playfulness of the lyrics and the story make this song what it is. It starts off harmless enough, the storyteller's credit card gets declined and he then has to leave the store in shame. While we all may not have been in the exact situation, we all can relate to the situation off being tight on cash. As the song progresses, the person telling the story goes to more dire extremes. What makes it so great is it's reliability. Todd Snider says it best when he says, “You'll never know what you'll do, until you do what you do, when your broke.”
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kHXQ1yDFsLU
https://www.cinnamon.video/nickelndime/watch?v=204381451846681948&l=L25pY2tlbG5kaW1l
Hope I Don't Fall in Love With You – Tom Waits
When people complain about Tom Waits' gravely broken voice, my response is always, “That's not a bug, that's the feature.” Then I add, “You're not very smart.” It's cool, I get it. Some people don't like the rough and scratchy voice. To me, there's a honesty that can not be achieved with a classically trained voice. A great example of this is Tom's song, “Downtown Train.” Rod Stewart did a cover of it, and it sounds as awful you can imagine. Why? Rod has a way better voice than Tom, therefore it should sound better. It doesn't, and if you don't believe me here are the two:
Here's Tom's...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rLtZKkCIVmI
Here's Rods...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vPrtOFKPWY
Rod's version is chessy isn't it? Sounds like something that you would hear in an elevator or shopping for groceries. Anyway back to the song hand.
Lyrical Breakdown
Well I hope that I don't fall in love with you
'Cause falling in love just makes me blue
Well the music plays and you display
Your heart for me to see
I had a beer and now I hear you
Calling out for me
And I hope that I don't fall in love with you
Well the room is crowded, people everywhere
And I wonder, should I offer you a chair?
Well if you sit down with this old clown
Take that frown and break it
Before the evening's gone away
I think that we could make it
And I hope that I don't fall in love with you
Well the night does funny things inside a man
These old tom-cat feelings you don't understand
Well I turn around to look at you
You light a cigarette
I wish I had the guts to bum one
But we've never met
And I hope that I don't fall in love with you
I can see that you are lonesome just like me
And it being late, you'd like some some company
Well I turn around to look at you
And you look back at me
The guy you're with he's up and split
The chair next to you's free
And I hope that you don't fall in love with me
Now it's closing time, the music's fading out
Last call for drinks, I'll have another stout
Well I turn around to look at you
You're nowhere to be found
I search the place for your lost face
Guess I'll have another round
And I think that I just fell in love with you
The premise of this song is simple enough. Guy see's a girl, likes girl, and falls for girl. I guess that's the genius of the lyrics is that he's trying the best to tell himself, “Stay away, don't fall in love,” and yet he can't help himself. The imagery and metaphors in this song paint a very vivid picture of the scene. It's a shy guy who is checking out a girl and she flashes him a smile. It's the thoughts and actions in between these events that make it so grandiose.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8tTULOZUEY
https://www.cinnamon.video/nickelndime/watch?v=204383704699635046&l=L25pY2tlbG5kaW1l
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