[Script Offer] [F4M] Establishing Dominance [Your Boyfriend's an Asshole] [Let Me Show You How to Get Him Under Control] [Exhibitionism] [Cuckqueen] [Manipulative Fdom] [Relationship Badvice] [Handjob] [Riding] [Edging] [Boyfriend Training] [Good Boy] #nsfw
~2200 words, estimated 20-25 minutes
[Tone is conversational when addressing the girlfriend, soft and seductive when addressing the boyfriend. For convenience and readability, lines are marked [BF/GF] when the intended listener changes.]
[GF] So, look. I don't want to say it, but somebody has to. And I'm saying this as your best friend, okay? This is all out of love.
Your boyfriend's an asshole.
He's never around when you need him.
He's always picking fights with you.
You ask him for something simple, he just bickers and pouts.
Like, remember that time you left your purse home, and you asked him to bring it to you? He just went on about how he didn't want you to think he was “whipped,” and made up some bullshit excuse.
And what about that time your car broke down last winter? You asked him to come pick you up, he promised he'd be right there, and instead he waited an hour for the game to finish.
Look, I know you think you can change him, but it's been, what, six months? And has he improved?
No, I didn't think so.
Look, I've never had these problems with the guys I date. Maybe I could, you know, give you some tips?
Let me show you.
[BF, louder] Hey, boyfriend! Come downstairs!
[GF] [Dismissive] Yes, yes. He has a name. I just don't care.
Look, what I'm about to do may seem a little weird, okay? Just remember – it's all out of love. I'm not trying to steal him away or anything. If it saves the relationship, it's worth it, right?
[BF] There you are. Took your sweet time getting here, didn't you?
Sit down.
[Commanding, stern] I said, sit down.
[Softer] Good boy.
[GF] Now, first you want to straddle him. Make yourself the only thing he's thinking about.
Just like this.
And then undo his pants...
[BF] Uh-uh. Don't look at her. Look at me.
[GF] And take his cock out.
[Laughter] Oh, wow. Excitable, isn't he?
Good. That'll make this easier.
So, you can start on him right away. Especially when he's already hard.
But I like to build the anticipation first. I just take one finger, and gently trace it up and down his cock.
See how his eyes go wide?
He doesn't know what to do.
His girlfriend's best friend is toying with his cock, right in front of her.
He's clearly not in control.
He doesn't want to do anything that might make me stop.
So he just freezes in place.
Pass me my purse, will you?
Thank you.
[Amused] Now, there's practical advantages of keeping lube in your purse.
But we're more interested in the psychological effects.
If he knows you've always got lube, he knows you can give him a wet...
Slick...
Handjob...
Anytime you feel like it.
Maybe he'll be driving you somewhere, and you'll tell him to pull over.
Maybe you'll be out at the bar, and tell him to wait in the bathroom for you.
Or maybe he'll just be minding his own business at home, and you'll push him right up against the fucking wall.
It's always going to be on his mind.
And he's going to ask himself, how can I make that happen?
How can I feel her soft, warm hand gliding up and down my throbbing cock?
What can I do to deserve that reward?
See how his eyes are watching the bottle?
And as I let it pour over his cock, his heart starts racing.
[BF, Amused] Try to relax, boyfriend.
[GF] You want to use plenty of lube. The wetter, the better.
Don't worry about making a mess. You can have him clean it up later.
That should do it.
You want to start off slow and easy. Let him appreciate your hand on his cock first.
[Handjob begins, slow and teasing]
[BF] Do you like my hand stroking your shaft?
Does it feel good?
I'm going to start slow, because we need to establish some rules.
First, you don't cum without permission. No matter how fast I stroke you, no matter how much you want to, you hold it back until I'm ready.
Second, you don't do anything unless I tell you to. No bucking your hips, keep your hands at your sides, and keep your eyes locked with mine.
Third, you don't talk unless I ask you something.
If you break any of the rules, this all stops. Immediately.
I take my hand away, and I get off you.
Leaving you messy and twitching and begging for what you can't have.
But if you manage to do everything I say...
I'll fuck you.
You'll get a moment to recover, and then you get to find out what my tight, wet pussy feels like.
Do we have a deal?
Good boy.
Now, I'm going to take you right to the edge of cumming.
But you're not going to cum.
No matter how intense it feels, no matter how tight and fast my hand strokes you, you don't cum.
Understand?
No, don't look at her. Look me right in the eyes.
Understand?
Good boy.
[Stroking slowly speeds up, reaching a furious pace]
Right in my eyes, baby. Let me see how close you are. Show me that desperation.
Are you close?
Yeah?
Keep holding it. Don't cum.
Uh-uh. That wasn't a question. No talking.
Just hold it...
Hold it...
There we go.
[Stroking stops]
[Mock sympathy] Aw. Did you want to cum?
Well, this isn't about what you want.
Do you want me to start stroking you again?
First, you're going to apologize to her, for the time you left her all alone in a snowstorm.
Nuh-uh, not good enough. Tell her what you're sorry for.
And are you ever going to do it again?
Good boy.
[Handjob resumes, slow and teasing]
[GF] I'll bet you never thought he'd apologize for anything, did you?
But when you've broken him in...
He'll do anything you want.
You just need to push him hard enough.
Now, one of my favorite ways to push a guy is moaning.
Just lean right into his ear, and...
[Soft moans]
It doesn't matter how fake it sounds.
You just need to push those buttons.
Drive him insane.
Just watch.
[Slow building soft moans, handjob slowly speeds up for around twenty seconds – moans continue to build between lines]
Mm, see how close he's getting?
[BF, soft, still moaning] Are you close?
Are you right on the edge?
Do you want to cum for me?
[GF, amused] See how desperate he is? But I'm going to push him just a little more.
[Moaning intensifies, slowly becoming louder]
You want to pay special attention to that magic spot just under his head.
Make sure he feels the soft, wet friction of your hand twisting and sliding over it.
If you want to push him, you can focus right on that spot.
[Stroking becomes faster, shallower]
Stroke just the head of his cock, fast and tight.
[Moaning reaches fever pitch, like an overacting pornstar nearing orgasm]
[Amused] And look at him. Eyes clenched shut...
Tensing his muscles...
Just struggling to keep himself from tipping over that edge.
God, I love that look.
[Handjob stops, moaning stops]
[BF] Good boy. I think you've earned a little break.
[GF] At this point, he's broken man. He'll do just about anything you ask, if you even hint that you'll make him cum after.
And you know what the best part is?
He knows exactly what you're doing.
He knows you're just playing mind games to get what you want.
And he doesn't care.
As long as he thinks you'll make him cum, he's all yours.
[BF] How do you feel, boyfriend? A little pent up?
Well, if you're a good boy, maybe I'll take care of you.
[GF] Now, when you're ready to make him cum, there's two things you want to keep in mind.
[Amused] First, he's going to cum like a fucking fire hose. Watch where that dick's pointing.
I like to aim him right against his shirt. Let him deal with his own mess.
Second, you want to watch him. Get to know his signals. Look for the exact point where he cums, so you can learn how to stop him just short of it.
The better you know him, the harder you can push him next time.
[BF] Ready, boyfriend?
[Handjob resumes, fast and urgent]
This time, I want you to cum for me.
But I want you hold that cum back for as long as I say.
You can do that, can't you?
You can hold that cum in?
Even when I squeeze you tighter?
Even when I stroke you faster?
Even when you feel like you can't take anymore?
[Softer] Even when it feels like torture?
That's right. Hold it back.
Don't think about cumming all over my hand.
Don't think about my merciless grip, pushing you closer and closer.
Hold it.
Be a good boy.
Hold it for me.
Okay.... Now!
Cum for me. Shoot that fucking load all over. Show us how much you need this.
[Gasp] Oh, fuck! [Laughter]
[GF, amused] See what I mean?
[BF] Good boy. Keep cumming for me. Let it all out.
There we go.
[Stroking slows]
[GF] You want to keep stroking him, even when he's done.
Make sure you get it all out.
Just keep going until he gets sensitive.
[Amused] Of course, if he's done something wrong...
Well, you can keep going until he's learned his lesson.
But we'll go easy on him.
[Stroking stops]
Just let your hand rest on his cock.
Look him right in the eyes. Let him wonder if you'll give him more.
Now, I know what you're thinking. He'll just jack off and edge himself silly, and all that control you have will be gone.
But that's not the whole picture.
[Amused] Now, don't me wrong, he'll try it. He'll try it a lot.
But it won't take him long to realize it's not the same.
See, it's not just about making him cum.
It's your control that makes him feel this good.
Surrendering to the pleasure that you choose to give him...
Until he earns your approval.
Until you tell him you want to see him cum.
And of course, it's not your soft hand wrapped around his cock.
[Amused] And it sure as hell isn't your pussy.
Speaking of which, I can feel him getting hard again.
[BF] Are you ready to get fucked, boyfriend?
Well, why don't you watch me hitch my skirt up...
Push my panties to the side...
And lower myself – [entry moan] fuck!
[GF, breathless] Holy shit. Is this why you haven't broken up with him?
[Moaning as she rides him]
His cock is just, incredible.
It hits that perfect spot, nice and snug.
Just... fuck. [Laughter]
Well, I'm happy for you. He'll be amazing when he's trained.
[BF] Uh-uh, boyfriend. That wasn't an invitation. Keep your hands to yourself.
[Riding stops] Hands to yourself, or this is over.
Good boy.
[Riding resumes]
[GF] Of course, when you've got him properly trained, you can let him put his hands all over you.
But we're still breaking him in. He might try to pull you into him when he's on the edge. He might not even realize it.
You want him to know that you are in control. You decide what pleasure he gets. Everything he's feeling is only because you allowed it.
And when...
When...
God, I'm sorry. He just feels so good.
I was going to edge him some more, but...
I think it's my turn to cum.
[Riding intensifies]
[BF] What about you, boyfriend? Are you ready to cum?
[Playful] Hm. I don't remember saying you'd get to cum.
This is really more about me.
What will you do if I let you cum?
Will you stop picking fights with your girlfriend?
Oh, yes you do. That's a lie, sweetie.
And liars don't get to cum inside me.
[Amused] That's better.
Well, you've been such a good boy for me.
I'll tell you what.
I want you to put your fingers on my clit.
When you make me cum, I'll give you permission to cum.
Understand?
[Gasping] Oh, fuck!
[Struggling, gasping] I'll bet he never... Fuck.
Never touched you like this, did he?
[Amused] See what – Oh my god, fuck! – What happens when...
[Whimpering]
When you give him an incentive?
Shit! Okay, that's...
Good boy. I'm – I'm almost there. Make me, make me cum.
Like that. Just like – Fuck!
Okay. Okay. Ready?
Cum for me! Pump that fucking load deep inside me.
[Improv to orgasm]
[Recovering, gasping] Fuck.
[Laughter] See, that's... That's what I'm talking about.
Well, let me know if you want me to show you again. I won't mind.
[Amused] Yeah, I'll get off him in a moment, just hang on.
[Laughter] My legs won't stop shaking. God, I'm leaking all over him.
[BF] See that, boyfriend? See what happens when you do what you're told?
Okay, help me get off you.
[Amused] Well, go on. Go clean yourself up.
[GF] And that is how you get your asshole of a boyfriend to shape up.