Circular Revision
Awake with the birds, singing
No
Wake with dawn breaking to the songs of birds singing
No
Be awake; Listen! Birds sing this day into being
No
The day sings you awake
Yes
Inspired by Shirley McPhillips and “Uncommon Education” via https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k5qzl7v7Kzc for #nwp